Responses
Two schools were contacted to view and evaluate this site. They were also asked to include any comments that could help improve it.Charlottetown Rural
All students were from
Mrs. Grudich's English class.
I think they have done a great job with the grassroots project. The only thing i would change is the large font on the left hand side of the webpage to a smaller font. Out of 10 Iwould give this presentation a 9. I'd have to say that the structure of the project is well done. I did find a few spelling mistakes, but I think they would have been avoided if there was more proofreading done.
A Brown
I took the time to look over your website it is very well done! It must of took a long time to put together, but it would be a good way to study easier. The colours are a bit dark. You should have proofread it a bit more carefully for I saw lots of errors.I liked how there were definitions because many terms people would not know. Good idea! It shows time and determination on the students part that they drew pictures and created videos. I think overall this website was very well done. Who ever particapated deserves a lot of credit!! Good Job!!
Sincerly Stacey Burge
The web page your class and you created is very good with lost of creativity. I liked the the big font ,it made easy to read. the links were easy to find and follow. There was lits of color and and great pictures. I also liked the videos.
j. Doyle
This web page is very creative and easy to navigate through. There is a lack of color in the page. It would be much easier to read if it had different colors and different fonts. I thought the links were very easy to get though and easy to see. It has lots of information but could be a bit more organized.
S Hughes
I had finished looking through your website which is located at (www.edu.pe.ca/gray/english621/index.html)
I think the site is very well put together with great videos acted out by the students of the school. As for the quizes and scene summaries, they are truly awesome as well. If i were to suggest something it would be that you should proofread the whole site very carefully for spelling errors, and mispellings. Also you may want to have a section saying, who had a part in making the site, and who did what parts, so everyone could be recognized for the hard work that they put in. Also if you have a guestbook so ppl could easily just drop off coments, but you would ask ppl a question on macbeth to be able to write a comment, that way you know that everyone that signs the guestbook, knows at least one fact of the play macbeth.
My favourite part of the site would have to be important quotes from every scene, because i say "everyone should be remembered for the important quotes they say, that way they all have their own personal quote."
S Livingston
After looking over your website I found it to be extremely well done I liked the videos because it showed the work and effort put into the site.It was very easy to navigate because of the large font and made it easy to see what you were looking for.The links I didn't really understand but it was a good decision I think.I thought it very well written because it made sense in a way that everyone could understand.The quiz was a good concept to use because it is like a game in a way.I couldn't have done a better job myself.
Tyler Beaton
Hello,
I took the time to look over one of the websites and it was very well put together. I liked what you included in the website and the info was very well researched and good to read.You could of added more color and changed it throughout the website. Also a little more time could of been spent on spell check but other than that well done.
Bye and congrats on you hard work.
A Cairns
Queen Charlotte
All students were from
Mr. Power's English class.
I visited the web site your class made and I thought it was very creative with all the color, pictures and videos! Good job:) I also thought the font was very easy to read. The explanations were short and simple, which I thought just made the whole website easier to follow and to understand. I also thought the whole thing was very creative! GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
~ Brittaney Lewis-Queen Charlotte
I went to both of your websites and I thought they were both really good. I really liked this one because it explained the story, and characters really well, and the language was great because if was easier for me to understand and it made everything more interesting. The links were really cool too. The other MacBeth website was really neat too. I thought the videos were really cool, but a little hard to understand because the words were broken up (but maybe that was just my computer...). it also had cool fonts and was easy to navigate too.
Maureen Handrahan
Hey
I looked at your macbeth site and omg it really gets you into it like everything seems so interesting and then color and set it easy to read and go to from one thing to another it's awsome i understand it ( i didn';t even read macbeth yet!) so it's really good website ! i though that i would just surf it and i spend all my time looking at it!! hehe it's very interesting i though that macbeth seems more interesting than i would have every imagined! i had fun looking at your website!
-allison shields
Hey!
My name is Sarah Chaisson, and I've just reviewed this website: www.edu.pe.ca/gray/english621/index.html. I really think you did a very good job on your Macbeth Website, it was really well done. I really liked how you relates modern day life to Macbeth, it worked out very well and was easy to understand. Before reading that I thought Macbeth would be some boring story that I would neve want to read but after reading those summaries of Macbeth in Modern day life I became more interested because I could in some way relate.I checked out your summaries next and they were very well written and again, easy to understand and interesting. The quotes I didn't really understand but that's probably because I've never read the play but the Idea behind the quotes like the use of learning is good! The study tips and the quiz would be a really big help to anyone that had to write and essay or do a test on Macbeth so I think that is a really good Idea and is very helpful. I have to say my favorite part of the whole website would have to be the pictures and the videos. The pictures were really cool and the videos were amazing and very very well done they were kind of freaky but really cool. All in all this website is verrrrrrrrryyyyy good and I would definetly use it if I was studying or wanted to know more about Macbeth. On a scale of 1-10 I would probably give it a 9.5. The only thing I think you need to do is maybe proofread it a bit more because I found some simple spelling and grammar mistakes that can be fixed easily, but other then that GREAT JOB!
~~Sarah
Hi ..i just finished viewing your site and i really enjoyed it and i thought it was really good as it is. i like the study tips and stuff its great !! i dont have anything negative so say about it.
Suzanne McIntyre